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Sunday, February 10, 2013

Poem for Sunday Whirl #95


Thanks, Brenda, for this wordle prompt...





incidents from The Ball

she
courts the rare
leaves open threads
the warp upon a loom

she
bathes
in coral bubbles
from ornamental bottles

she
floats on Prada
dodges the breath of banal
seeks the next dessert

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13 comments:

Mama Zen said...

I love this! Fabulous wordle.

Emma Major said...

wonderful, really amazing

oldegg said...

A full life but an empty one. Loved the picture that you painted so well.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

She sounds like someone who is accustomed to having it all!

Another Whirl with Yeats

sabrabowers said...

Can get a real sense of her from your poem.

Mad Kane said...

Really good! I especially liked"

"floats on Prada
dodges the breath of banal
seeks the next dessert"


Madeleine Begun Kane

Stan Ski said...

I knew her when she had nothing... ;)

thewritersvillage said...

very nice...
Randy

Jules said...

Packed a punch with this one -
I thought of fairy tales until I got to Prada. Hmm. Did Prada ever make glass slippers?

Nicely done!

Lorraine said...

Wow this is extraordinary...:) and Happy Valentine's day :)

purplepeninportland said...

I love this poem, and the format was excellent!

Lorraine said...

So what's the deal people send you photos and your inspiration write it out? that would be very cool? I have incredible photos lol

flaubert said...

I know some women like this, Susan. Nice compact use of the words as always.

Pamela