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Sunday, November 18, 2012

Senryu for Sunday Whirl #83


Thanks, Brenda, for the Wordle prompt!




under fire
facades of beauty
silent pawns

♥     ♥     ♥

Sorry, I couldn't belong. 
There were too many wrong words 
for my unfindable muse
and a busted life ~
but without pride, 
I played a short senryu anyhoo! 
Unless.
♥ and smiles

8 comments:

Mad Kane said...

I enjoyed both of them!
Madeleine Begun Kane

Mama Pajama said...

well played!

Cathy said...

Those blasted Muse, they are wondefull but also a real pain in the ass too!!!!

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Daydreamertoo said...

I'm glad you played along even though the muse seemed elusive. What you did write is lovely. :)
Thanks for the visit to me.

Stan Ski said...

But you found a way to get all the words in...!
Well done!

annell said...

Sometimes this is the way it is...good to recognize!

flaubert said...

Susan, nicely done. Good use of the word "pawn", which for me was unusable. Nice to see you this week. I hope you have a nice Thanksgiving, if you celebrate.

Pamela

Cheryl said...

Nicely done. Both of them. Thanks for visiting.