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an intersting progression in this...each line is almost a thought itself...
"egg-white soak" ... love :)rosemarymint.wordpress.com
Your poem reminds me of using egg whites as a facial when my sisters and I were teens .... :)
egg white soak and a yolk masque?Nice twist wth this image.
Short and sweet, I like that it happened without a care.
An alice in wonderland facial!
Great take on the picture prompt... and congratulations on your novel!!!
There's a lot more here than meets the eye.You're good at that...=)
Nice. I like the thought of drying wings. Makes her seem like an angel on her day off almost.
Sounds relaxing, I must admit! Think I'll try this..
dying wings add a sadness to this
Very clever and so wonderfully compressed. You do this very well. K.
I like what what you did with the prompt.
Now that is cool! thanks!
The progression of new life. Nicely done.
Hey....this was good! Paints the picture...and leaves many ways to interpret. That's a lot of work for nine words! Vb
Always thought provoking and concise. Thank you for sharing, Tumblewords. I hope you are enjoying a wonderful spring. =D
I really like the egg twist too. I didn't know about your novel!! How exciting. It's going on my Nook, Sue. Congratulations.
Thanks, Laurie!Thank you, Christine! I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! Yesterday I listened to your 'Fragile Beauty' CD. I can't count the times and each time it's a new pleasure.
Very interesting. Still thinking about it... Thank you.
Fabulous, minimalistic mag!
Nice haiku! And congrats on your novel! Madeleine Begun Kane
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