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still life...supreme bliss...bkm
Very nicely done!
wonderful the fiery fragility
Love this haiku, thank you.
Beautiful haiku!doomed if I do, doomed if I don't
Fab haiku... Supreme life.. absoulte delight !!!
Powerful use of words,strong Haiku!
The fire, the fragility, the stillness…, an eclectic mix of impermanence and eternity
im amazed by your little jewel :)
Short. precise. Powerful.
Short but sweet...
a still life painting,love it.cool magpie!
The pictuare is a still life painting. Well said!
I love your Haiku. So much with so few words what a treasure.
very successful haiku - I always feel the poem succeeds when it shows me something right under my nose that I didn't recognize. In ten words, you showed me - a still life painting. Marvellous!
Wonderfully stated, still life, maybe we could learn something from this concept as opposed to our fast paced world to today.Still life... in what sense of the word? Total bliss.
great imagery-perfect words
ha. love the turn in the last line...great magpie!
I had to look into the lamp again..I see it now! Very nice!
"echo the fragile chimney" - Nice!
Wonderful. Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender
Excellent magpie! =)-Weasel
I'd love to be able to paint the image my mind conjures at your words.
Small, but beautifully formed.
Haikus need understanding of form and structure. The 17 moras in 5-7-5 form. Of cutting kireji.I rarely try it because of its stringent requirements.Here at last I find a haiku as close to its Japanese form as possible.Lovely. Really lovely.
Ahhh, now I see it. It's a Senryu. No wonder there was no reference to the season, or kigo.Thank you for introducing different forms of Japanese poetry.Still, your senryu was so delightful.
I love the juxtaposition of the fiery and the fragile.
Beautiful image you painted in my mind. Thank you.
An amazing Magpie Tumblewords! :-)
Just simply a perfect Magpie.Mine is up.PG
Wonderful dichotomous images TW, fiery/still life, reflections/still life, fragile/chimney. Beautiful.
Do not know anything about haikus, but I loved the tranquil zen feeling of your words.
Sue,A perfect description!rel
Exquisite! I love haiku and this is a gem, thank you.
You have said it all so concisely. This is perfect. I can see it!
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