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Marvellous haiku, it has a certain sense of mystery and intrigue..."as ancient as time itself" - beautiful, resounding line.
love the concept
perfect. hope all is well.
As if to infer the watering can as the earth in our hands.... This stirs my imagination! Rick
A lovely haiku. Very well done.
excellent job,loved this compact and elegant piece.
Lovely Haiku! Recycling moisture!
I like your use of haiku.
Beautiful and elegant! I wish I were able to write like you.
Clever haiku and full of meaningChristine
Lovely haiku, Tumblewords. :-)
Nice Haiku and resonating last line!
I really liked this. Compact but elegant.
So nicely simple! I admire that.
Perfectly composed haiku ....
Ancient as time itself.Oh my goodness, how true and I never thought of it that way! Very profound.
I like both haiku and photo.
I love that! Recycling moisture indeed!
I like this one. Don't you wonder what the first watering can was made of?
Green with envy! :-)
I love this haiku. Simple like the lines of the old watering can.
nice haiku...is it the watering can or the water that is anchient...or perhaps they earn it together...nice magpie.
oh wonderful haiku
Very cool haiku!
Perfect piece, lovely words.
A beautiful Haiku with a simple and environmental message. Lovely!
What a nicely fitting Haiku!
lovely haiku. I like the new picture you added too.The more I let the words sink in, the more better I like it.thanks for visiting me
NEVER would my unimaginative brain thought to put up my own Magpie picture. And then say SO much in such brevity. Haiku has to be "just right"...and yours IS!Thanks for visiting me.Steve
Loved this! :)
lovely haiku...recycling mositure...that leaves a refreshing feeling...bkm
Nice description. Did you draw the rain, too? Wow!
Dear Sue: This is so zen-like and pure; there is a feel of great spiritual refreshment!
Perfect. I love the many forms you are using. You express so much in so few words. I feel like i am in a tea garden with music tinkling nearby as I read them.
Sue,Recycle and restore, words, plants and life.rel
a little beauty Tumblewords. Ancient water - so common so unrecognised.
Your Haiku feels so positive and refreshing.
Lovely haiku. Perfectly suited. Thank you.
There are few things I love more than to be transported into history via an unexpected image.
I'm simply amazed at how spot on those who write Haiku are. Within so few words lie a description, a story. Thank you for your kind comments on Writing in Amazement. Have a grand day!
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